Really good job overall! Don’t be afraid to get in closer to the sculptures! Did you remember to turn on shadows on one of the lights in each work? Some feel flat. Comments:
Journey: great color, shape, composition: but it seems like its floating: can you add a drop shadow to ground it more?
Metallic / Heroic Entity: If I recall, the ball is floating in there, but we can’t tell that from this angle – how does it look if you move the camera angle a bit so we see that? Also, the spotlights have very solid prenumbras and are all the same color – what if the color varied slightly and/or the circles were softer?
Foundation: this is the flattest of them all – not a lot of shape (is the light too bright on the red legs? - the legs seem disconnected in the front -why? - The texture of the ball doesn’t feel quite right with the rest of the piece – be more consistent with the textures / materials - The overall composition pulls your eye out – think about zooming out a bit Elementals 2 (2nd composition is best), but the chopped off 2nd ball above leads our eye out with the bright white (remove?) - is that texture on the ball the best choice?
Dreams: very interesting feel! Great use of light for atmosphere and strong composition.
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Alex,
Really good job overall! Don’t be afraid to get in closer to the sculptures! Did you remember to turn on shadows on one of the lights in each work? Some feel flat. Comments:
Journey: great color, shape, composition: but it seems like its floating: can you add a drop shadow to ground it more?
Metallic / Heroic Entity: If I recall, the ball is floating in there, but we can’t tell that from this angle – how does it look if you move the camera angle a bit so we see that? Also, the spotlights have very solid prenumbras and are all the same color – what if the color varied slightly and/or the circles were softer?
Foundation: this is the flattest of them all – not a lot of shape (is the light too bright on the red legs?
- the legs seem disconnected in the front -why?
- The texture of the ball doesn’t feel quite right with the rest of the piece – be more consistent with the textures / materials
- The overall composition pulls your eye out – think about zooming out a bit
Elementals 2 (2nd composition is best), but the chopped off 2nd ball above leads our eye out with the bright white (remove?)
- is that texture on the ball the best choice?
Dreams: very interesting feel! Great use of light for atmosphere and strong composition.
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